Thursday, May 2, 2013

The Deep. (Resubmitting due to post failure)


I'm resubmitting this as I think it failed the first time I tried. If it didn't fail and this is a repost, sorry.


Today's prompt is potentially quite fantasy, if you want to take it that way.


Story: You were on a boating trip out into deep waters, hoping to see some whales. It'd been 5 hours but you still hadn't seen a single thing.


"Can we go back now?" Your son asked "I'm bored"


"Soon buddy" you replied. "Not just yet" Then suddenly you hear a loud beep from your radar, and then another one, and another. You raced over to the screen and stared at it excitedly.


"Somethings coming up" You shouted, "Quickly, look over the sides!" So everyone did, including you. You saw a faint shadow, deep in the water. Getting bigger and bigger, and closer and closer.


"Everyone hold on" You yelled Then suddenly it broke out of the surface.


Questions: What was the "thing"? Was it living or was it dead? Was it a monster or was it an animal? Or was it even a robot or a submarine. Was it from this earth or was it alien?


That's it, short one today. Go!



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